On the second Tuesday of each month, we choose one member’s story for feedback from the Life Writers community.
Tonight, we reviewed Linda Peterson’s story about a bikini, a burn, and a lot of suffering in “One Hot Bikini.”
We also reviewed a few story notes about grammar, punctuation, and other ways to improve our writing.
View the story notes for this session here.
We reviewed the need to check spelling of proper nouns, remove unnecessary words, and keep an eye out for those ing words.
Could this be a bikini similar to the one Linda made?
The Member Story Review is a great way to improve your writing and editing skills and learn how to give constructive feedback to your fellow members.
Take advantage of this great opportunity and upload your story here for review in a future Member Story Review session.