On the second Tuesday of each month, we choose one member’s story for review by the Life Writers community.
Tonight, we looked at Dave Godin’s story about a BB gun credited to an unlikely source in “Christmas BB Gun.”
We reviewed how to make our stories easy on the eyes of our readers, proper capitalization of plant and animal names, the use of commas with introductory phrases and to separate independent clauses and/or phrases, and more.
View the story notes for this session here.

The Member Story Review is a great way to improve your writing and editing skills and learn how to give constructive feedback to your fellow members.
Take advantage of this great opportunity and upload your story here for review in a future Member Story Review session.