On the second Tuesday of each month, we choose one member’s story for review by the Life Writers community.
Tonight, we discussed Barbara Gardner’s story, “The Unforgettable EB,” and learned how the briefest of encounters can impact our lives.
View the story notes for this session here. One of my goals for these story notes is for you to use this information to create a personal editing checklist.
Complete this fillable editing checklist of edits specific to you and your work.
The Member Story Review is a great way to improve your writing and editing skills and learn how to give constructive feedback to your fellow members.
This is not EB. Because Barbara described her so vividly, I added her details and had AI generate an image.
Thank you for this beautiful story, Barbara. I’ve attached my comments on the feedback form.
Raquel I appreciate the time you took to share your feedback with me. I apologize. Am just seeing your comments today, 5/14/25, long after you made them in March!! I didn’t realize any comments were made here. Thank you so much. Peace
What a beautiful story, Barbara. You caught the light and energy generated by EB. She came alive. Thank you for sharing it and her with all of us.
Ricki,
Am just seeing this today, 514/!!apologies Ricki. I didn’t realize that anyone had commented on my story here. And this was way back in MarchThanks so much for your comments. I am happy you were inspired by EB as much as I was. Peace
You’re welcome Barbara! I only wish I had been prepared to give you feedback when it was your night.
Take good care, Barbara
-Raquel