In our first Writers CAFE on Tuesday, October 11, at 5:00 p.m. ET, we discussed what we might learn from reading Dispatches from Pluto by Richard Grant.
Then, we used Kit Dwyer’s story, “Breakfast with Peanuts,” and practiced giving feedback. Here are the story notes–tips you can use to improve your stories.
If you have not been in a Life Writers feedback session yet, please watch the Giving and Receiving Feedback video to get an idea of how it’s done.
You can use the Feedback Form or Detailed Feedback Form to provide feedback to authors you review in the future.
Also, here is detailed information on how to prepare your story to receive feedback: Prepare for Feedback Submission.
I look forward to practicing with you.
Here is a story for which I would like feedback.
My story is from the musical prompt. Enjoy!
This is an exploration in genre, for the fun of it, not mastered. This halloween story is about writing, no matter what goes on in my head, just write. Write.